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		<title>M. Rothschild the Queen of Bloodsucking Parasites</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Oct 2011 05:26:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>When it comes to the annoying blood sucking parasite known as the lowly flea, there is little that Miriam Rothschild did not know. Much of what we know about the flea can be attributed to the work of Dame Miriam Rothschild, who was, for many years, one of the leading authorities on this bloodsucking parasite.</p> [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When it comes to the annoying blood sucking parasite known as the lowly flea, there is little that Miriam Rothschild did not know. Much of what we know about the flea can be attributed to the work of Dame Miriam Rothschild, who was, for many years, one of the leading authorities on this bloodsucking parasite.</p>
<p>Born Mariam Louisa Rothschild on August 5, 1908 in Ashton Wold, East Northamptonshire, England, fleas were in her lineage so to speak. Rothschild&#8217;s father, Charles Rothschild, was a banker that was known for having identified over 500 new species of fleas. The home educated Rothschild showed her own interests in discovering more about the world of insects and parasites when at age four she began collecting ladybird beetles. By the age of 17 the home schooled Rothschild would chose to go to school for the first time and attended evening classes in zoology at Chelsea College of Science and Technology. Although she lacked a formal education, Rothschild received a series of honorary doctorates from eight different universities, including Oxford and Cambridge.</p>
<p>As an author, Rothschild wrote books about her father and her uncle as well as a book titled <em>Fleas, Flukes and Cuckoos</em> which was a successful book on parasites. The title of Rothschild&#8217;s parasite book referred to three distinct types of parasite: external parasites (fleas), internal parasites (flukes), and others (cuckoo being a &#8216;brood parasite&#8217;). In addition to her books, Rothschild wrote over 300 papers on subjects that included entomology and zoology. While Rothschild is best known for her research on fleas, she worked widely in the fields of entomology and botany.</p>
<p>Rothschild is rumored to have once said; &#8220;I must say, I find everything interesting&#8221;. And indeed she must have, for it was Rothschild who discovered how fleas jump. She also studied, with Nobel Prize laureate and chemist Tadeus Reichstein, how butterflies make themselves toxic through their choice of food. Her research on the bright coloration of butterflies and their toxicity lead Rothschild to find that other species had evolved to mimic the warning colors.</p>
<p>Still, it was the lowly flea for which Rothschild was best known for. Rothschild&#8217;s flea collections, a six volume catalog of her father&#8217;s collection of 30,000 specimens, made her the authority on fleas that other experts consulted. Rothschild&#8217;s flea collection can now be viewed at the <a href="http://www.nhm.ac.uk/research-curation/library/archives/catalogue/dserve.exe?dsqServer=placid&amp;dsqIni=Dserve.ini&amp;dsqApp=Archive&amp;dsqDb=Persons&amp;dsqSearch=Code==%27PX455%27&amp;dsqCmd=Show.tcl">Natural History Museum</a> in London.</p>
<p>While she was viewed as an expert on them, fleas were not the only thing in Rothschild&#8217;s life. Rothschild had a decently sized family, having married Captain George Lane, MC in 1943, and with him had six children; two sons and four daughters. Their marriage was dissolved in 1957.</p>
<p>During World War II, Rothschild worked to convince the British authorities to admit more Jews from Nazi Germany and worked to assist in cracking the Nazi&#8217;s codes. At one point during World War II, Miriam Rothschild provided shelter to nearly 50 Jewish children.</p>
<p>Throughout her life Miriam Rothschild would stand up for many things that she felt strongly for, including; better treatment for laboratory animals, free milk for school children and equal rights for gay people.</p>
<p>In talking about Mariam Rothschild, the London Times once said, &#8220;Imagine Beatrix Potter on amphetamines.&#8221; The world could use more energetically enthusiastic learners such as Dame Miriam Rothschild, ready to prove wrong those who would say that a person must hold formal education to make a significant difference in the world.</p>
<p>Dame Miriam Louisa Rothschild<br />
5 August 1908 &#8211; 20 January 2005</p>
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		<title>Who Controls Creative Work? The Creator or the Fans?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>The Blu-Ray Menace; or, Who Really Owns Star Wars?, a recent article in the Time online column Tuned In, raises the question of who an established work belongs to: its creator, or its fans? James Poniewozik, the author of the article, clarifies that he is not talking in terms of legal ownership, rather the question is [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>The Blu-Ray Menace; or, Who Really Owns Star Wars?</em>, a recent article in the Time online column <a href="http://tunedin.blogs.time.com/2011/08/31/the-blu-ray-menace-or-who-really-owns-star-wars/">Tuned In</a>, raises the question of who an established work belongs to: its creator, or its fans? James Poniewozik, the author of the article, clarifies that he is not talking in terms of legal ownership, rather the question is one of moral ownership. Specifically, can the creator of a work go back and make modifications to that work, even if the fans of the originally released version cry foul?</p>
<p>The question is raised because of the reaction of some fans to the addition of an outcry of &#8220;No!&#8221; in the scene in which Darth Vader throws Emperor Palpatine to his death in <em>Return of the Jedi</em>. Added for the Blue-Ray release of the original three Star Wars movies (Numbers 4, 5 and 6 for those who know the Star Wars numbering system), the outcry has caused an echo among the fans of the original movies, and raised a question. Does Lucas have the right to make that change? Or has he, for lack of a better way to phrase it, given the story to its fans in a finished form that can never be altered?</p>
<p>Leonardo da Vinci once said, &#8220;Art is never finished, only abandoned.&#8221; And that it is true, for what artist is ever fully satisfied with something they have created. Who can not see ways in which to improve something they created, even after it has been called finished. Should someone be able to go back and add, or remove, something in the interest of making their creation more like what they envision for it to be? Does a man, like Lucas, have the right to make changes to their creation when a new version is going to be released?</p>
<p><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0451169522/ref=as_li_ss_il?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=phantascene&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399369&amp;creativeASIN=0451169522"><img class="alignright" style="border: 0pt none;" src="http://ws.assoc-amazon.com/widgets/q?_encoding=UTF8&amp;Format=_SL160_&amp;ASIN=0451169522&amp;MarketPlace=US&amp;ID=AsinImage&amp;WS=1&amp;tag=phantascene&amp;ServiceVersion=20070822" alt="" width="95" height="160" border="0" /></a><img style="border: none !important; margin: 0px !important;" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=&amp;l=as2&amp;o=1&amp;a=0451169522&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399369" alt="" width="1" height="1" align="right" border="0" />Fans can be a treacherous slope to some creators. By now most of us are likely familiar with Stephen King&#8217;s horror novel <em>Misery</em>. A story in which an obsessed fan keeps her favorite author prisoner and forces him to write a new novel about her beloved character, just for her. Such extreme cases can only be hoped to be confined to the realm of fiction, but there is definitely a strong connection to someone else&#8217;s fictional creations when it comes to fans. This connection level varies along a very broad spectrum, one that could be an article on its own, and includes a sub-group of fans who, unlike the fanatical fan of King&#8217;s novel, write their own stories when the creator of a series has failed to write what they want.</p>
<p>The intricacies of copyright law and fan made works is a complexity that fills multiple volumes of books, and it narrows down to a simple focal point: Who controls the base creative product?</p>
<p>A significant number of artists, both writers and the creators of television shows and movies, set a precarious balance with their fans. Creators such as Gene Roddenberry and J.K. Rowling have been known to express their approval for fan made stories, while others, such as Anne McCaffery, creator of <em>The Dragonriders of Pern</em> series, were as equally well known to abolish any instance of fan made material as soon as it was discovered. McCaffery has recently changed her stance on fan made works, but it is still a precarious companionship for most creators. And not without good cause.</p>
<p>Marion Zimmer Bradley, author of the <em>Darkover</em> series, was extremely outspoken in her support of fan made stories set in the world she had created. Bradley even went so far as to voice disapproval with those, such as the Conan Doyle estate, who would seek to squash fan made fiction. In <em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0754679039/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=phantascene&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399373&amp;creativeASIN=0754679039">Fan Fiction and Copyright</a><img style="border: none !important; margin: 0px !important;" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=&amp;l=as2&amp;o=1&amp;a=0754679039&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399373" alt="" width="1" height="1" border="0" /></em>, Aaron Schwabach quotes Bradley as having said of fan made stories in her <em>Darkover</em> setting:</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">When I was a little kid, I was a great lover of &#8220;pretend&#8221; games, but after I was nine or ten, I could never get anyone to play them with me &#8230; And now I have a lot of fans, and friends, who will come into my magic garden and play the old &#8220;pretend games&#8221; with me.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;"><em>Far, far away somewhere in the middle of the Galaxy, and about four thousand years from now, there is a world with a great red sun and four moons. Won&#8217;t you come and play with me there?</em></p>
<p>The idyllic shared play that Bradley loved was ended, and she withdrew all of her permissions and placed a ban on fan made works, following an incident in which <a href="http://www.fanworks.org/writersresource/?action=define&amp;authorid=53&amp;tool=fanpolicy">Bradley was accused of plagiarism by a fan</a>. The fan demanded equal collaborative and monetary credit for one of the stories that Bradley was writing, claiming the idea to have come from a story the fan had written set in Bradley&#8217;s <em>Darkover</em> world. It resulted in Bradley&#8217;s publisher refusing to publish the novel in an effort to avoid a lawsuit, and in authors everywhere taking a strong second look at fan made work.</p>
<p>Before the age of the Internet, Lucasfilm seemed to recognize the importance of fans to a work such as Star Wars when they created a <a href="http://www.fanworks.org/writersresource/?action=define&amp;authorid=112&amp;tool=fanpolicy">licensing bureau for fan fiction</a>:</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">At the height of the original Star Wars phenomenon, Lucasfilm was wary of giving its stamp of approval to the tremendous amount of fan fiction being published. Their solution, according to Gran, was to set up a no-fee licensing bureau that reviewed material and offered criticism about what might be considered copyright infringement.</p>
<p>After the 1990&#8242;s, the Lucasfilm stance shifted, but remained marginally accepting of some forms of fan works, according to a November 7, 1999 article at Space.com:</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">Fan fiction not welcome<br />
While the news indicates that the Star Wars empire is taking a few cautious steps toward an &#8220;open source&#8221; model, Lucas is far from giving away all the keys to his kingdom.</p>
<p style="padding-left: 30px;">The site is very stringent about only wanting &#8220;parodies and documentaries&#8221; &#8212; no &#8220;attempts to expand on the Star Wars universe will be accepted,&#8221; ensuring that George Lucas and the company he founded remain the only sources for canonical information and stories about Star Wars and its characters.</p>
<p>And that focuses us back to the key point here: Who has controlling power over a created work? Does the creator have the right to go back and modify a story before a second publication, or do they owe something to the fans and therefore must leave it forever as it was when it was initially released?</p>
<p>Can the creator never make modifications to craft their artwork into something more like what they envisioned it could be? Yes, there is a certain level of &#8216;It&#8217;s finished now, leave it alone,&#8217; that is presumed. And in the case of a marble sculpture there is always the chance that one more chisel strike will break it, but is it not the right of the creator to adjust a bit here or there to make it more like what they want it to be &#8211; even at the risk of destroying their own creation.</p>
<p>Perhaps with all of the extras that the Blue-Ray format can accommodate there could be a copy of the original unmodified version of Star Wars included in the Blue-Ray edition, along with the Director&#8217;s Vision version. That way the fans who want to see the movie they saw in the theater can watch the original version, and those who want to see the movie George Lucas wanted to make can watch the Director&#8217;s Vision edition. Allowing them to see what Lucas now wishes he had thought to do before he released the movies the first time.</p>
<p>Whether or not Lucas includes an original edition with the Director&#8217;s Vision, the basic foundation of the matter remains the same. George Lucas, and anyone that has created a world and characters, should be able to adjust their creation if they feel it is necessary. The fans can complain, but in the end, it is up to the creator to make the final decision on whether they listen to what others say, or follow their hearts and create the story and world they wanted to the first time around.</p>
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<p>Critique This</p>
<p>Thank you for reading the entire article. I know it was a long one for the internet. I wrote it as practice for writing magazine length articles, so now that you have finished it I would welcome any critiques you might have on it. If you see something that was done wrong, or if there is something you particularly like about the article, please leave a critique comment on it. Your comments on this article will assist me in writing better articles in the future.</p>
<p>I am looking for the following:</p>
<p>1) Did you see a single underlying point within the article? What was it? Did I stay on point?<br />
2) Was the article easy to read, or did you have to force yourself to finish it? Was the article too long? (1,349 words)<br />
3) Did I answer all of the questions the article raised?</p>
<p>Anything else you might want to comment on would be appreciated, and I have a thick skin, so if you think I made a million grammatical errors and can&#8217;t write my way out of a paper bag, please let me know. I&#8217;m doing this to learn to improve my skills in article writing, so tear it apart.</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>
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		<title>Out of the work day and into the Blender</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 27 Aug 2011 02:06:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Blender 3D that is. For those who do not know, Blender 3D is a program made for creating 3D models. You are likely most familiar with the concept if you play SIMS, since The Sims is made up of little figures that are manipulated as 3D figures. Blender 3D is the kind of program that [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Blender 3D that is. For those who do not know, Blender 3D is a program made for creating 3D models. You are likely most familiar with the concept if you play SIMS, since The Sims is made up of little figures that are manipulated as 3D figures. Blender 3D is the kind of program that makes the stuff in games like The Sims. It is also an exceptionally powerful film making program for the creation of 3D films.</p>
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<p>I worked with Blender long ago, over 5 years ago at least, and am back into relearning it and expanding on what I had learned back when I first tried it out. I want to take some of the short stories I have but never got around to getting published, polish them up a bit, and try my hand at turning them into short 3D films.</p>
<p>It is going to take me a while to get to that level of skill, but I am fairly excited to see what I can do and it meshes perfectly into my original love of wanting to get into making movies. At the very least, I can make up all of the characters from my Heir to Magic world and start getting them loaded up onto that website. That is my first goal.</p>
<p>For now, Blender 3D is a very good fun toy for me to dangle at the end of the work day with a promise that once my work is all done I can play in Blender.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Rather or not I go back to college via my local college, I am going to take a few classes at MIT this fall. Specifically I am going to take some Open Courseware classes through MIT on writing. These are previously offered classes that have been made available, along with lecture notes and other information, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rather or not I go back to college via my local college, I am going to take a few classes at MIT this fall. Specifically I am going to take some Open Courseware classes through MIT on writing. These are previously offered classes that have been made available, along with lecture notes and other information, for the general public. My first attempted course is going to be 21W.755 <a href="http://ocw.mit.edu/courses/writing-and-humanistic-studies/21w-755-writing-and-reading-short-stories-fall-2006/">Writing and Reading Short Stories</a>, which is an undergraduate class presented on the MIT website as it was taught by Shariann Lewitt in the Fall of 2006.</p>
<p>The course focuses on the craft of the short story, and explores the short story through reading short stories, writers speaking about writing, and writing exercises and workshops. I will obviously not benefit from a lot of what the original class offered, but I am hoping that I will still gain some useful information from the information that is available on the website.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Proofread, proofread, proofread.</p> <p>It might seem like a tired old bit of advice, particularly in this age of computers with spell checkers built into everything including the Internet browser programs, but nothing beats good old fashioned spell checking by hand to make sure that you have everything looking right. And, if you are not a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Proofread, proofread, proofread.</p>
<p>It might seem like a tired old bit of advice, particularly in this age of computers with spell checkers built into everything including the Internet browser programs, but nothing beats good old fashioned spell checking by hand to make sure that you have everything looking right. And, if you are not a native speaker and reader of the language that you are printing something in, get a native to triple check everything for you.</p>
<p>Why, you might ask, do I suggest this? Because poor spelling cost a company a sale last night. I was in the store and I needed to pick up some cat litter. As usual, I scoped out the other brands to see if anything might be on sale and less expensive than my regular brand (hey, it&#8217;s dirt for cats to do their business in, I don&#8217;t see any reason to pay more than I have to for it).</p>
<p><span id="more-477"></span>Anyway, as I scan the shelves a purple bag catches my eye. Amazing Cat Litter. Hmm&#8230; a bit more expensive, but I&#8217;ll bite. What&#8217;s amazing about it?</p>
<p><a href="http://blog.freelancersoffice.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/Amazing-Cat-Litter.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-478" title="Amazing Cat Litter" src="http://blog.freelancersoffice.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/Amazing-Cat-Litter.jpg" alt="" width="346" height="480" /></a></p>
<p>I get the bag down and sit it in my cart. A cat litter that can last for up to eighty days, with multiple cats?  Now, as a cat owner / border, I can tell you that is amazing. I do good to make it a week with a container of litter for the four cats I harbor at my place. I want to know more about this silica crystal based cat litter (particularly since I had thought a few months ago as I cleaned the cat box that silica would be a great way to absorb the urine.</p>
<p>I flipped the bag around to see the back and find out more.</p>
<p><a href="http://blog.freelancersoffice.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/Amazing-back.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-full wp-image-479" title="Amazing back" src="http://blog.freelancersoffice.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/Amazing-back.jpg" alt="" width="424" height="484" /></a></p>
<p>Okay, so the bar graph is an eye catcher, and it caught my eye. 80 days is for one cat, three and you can make it for 30 days &#8211; which still beats normal litter in my experience. I look for more information about it and the next thing I see is the top right where a couple of small stopwatch images highlight some key points about the litter&#8230;. and I find a typo.</p>
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<p>It will leab my cat tray odor-free in 30 seconds? Is &#8220;leab&#8221; the new science in Amazing Cat Litter? I am fairly positive they meant that it would be &#8220;leaving odor-free cat try&#8221; not &#8220;leabing odor-free cat tray&#8221;. Interesting to find a typo like that on packaging, but, hey, it&#8217;s just cat litter. A typo can be overlooked, right?  I smile at the typo and read on&#8230;</p>
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<p>The benefits list is a reasonably long list.Third one down, their single bag will replace the same amount of 5 bags of clay or chumping litter&#8230; wait&#8230; chumping? My regular cat litter &#8220;chumps&#8221;? I think they mean &#8220;clumping&#8221;.  Skip that typo and continue on, a few more lines down and we have &#8220;no more urine-soaked chay&#8221;. So with my normal brand of cat litter my chay is getting urine soaked and chumping?</p>
<p>Still undeterred I move on to the instructions -</p>
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<p>First line&#8230;. &#8220;adry&#8221; &#8211; I think they meant &#8220;a dry&#8221;. Step 4, I&#8217;m not sure how you remobe something, but it sounds a little painful. I think they want you to &#8220;remove&#8221; the solid waste, and that would be for &#8220;best results&#8221;, not &#8220;best rosults&#8221;.</p>
<p>This was just far too many typos on such a small bag of cat litter, I snapped the above pictures and put it back onto the self. I&#8217;m sure that silica absorbs cat urine quite well, but I was turned off on trying it by how many typos there were on the packaging. I saved a little money by sticking with my regular brand.</p>
<p>And, I think it is an important lesson for anyone that is relying on writing to sway someone. You really need to make sure that you have caught every typo and corrected them before you send something out &#8211; in particular before you print a package or booklet for a product that is intended for mass distribution. People will overlook a few typos, and some people might overlook a lot of typos, but you can also loose potential customers if they are turned off by poor writing. It makes them wonder how much they can actually trust the product if the packaging has repeated and blatant typos &#8211; which was what happened to me with the cat litter.</p>
<p>Sure, it&#8217;s just something for my cats to defecate in, but after a certain number of typos on the package, I decided to stick with my regular brand that I know gets the task done, rather than risk buying the more expensive (twice as expensive) brand that was poorly packaged in a package littered with typos.</p>
<p>Read your work, then read it without relying on your spell checker. Then have someone else read it. Writing is very powerful and can sway people&#8217;s decisions. And when it is a brand you are trying to sell, you want them to be swayed in your favor, not away from the product.</p>
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		<title>Can&#8217;t we all just get along? Freelancing Friends</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Aug 2011 01:26:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I was reviewing article titles on my Google Reader a few minutes ago when my attention was caught by a Forbes post from Susannah Breslin: Dear Pink Slipped: Can Freelancers Be Friends?</p> <p>I can see the perspective of the questioner, identified as &#8220;Freelance Friend Finder&#8221;, in their ability to locate work being somewhat limited. There is [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was reviewing article titles on my Google Reader a few minutes ago when my attention was caught by a Forbes post from Susannah Breslin: <a href="http://blogs.forbes.com/susannahbreslin/2011/08/03/dear-pink-slipped-can-freelancers-be-friends/">Dear Pink Slipped: Can Freelancers Be Friends?</a></p>
<p>I can see the perspective of the questioner, identified as &#8220;Freelance Friend Finder&#8221;, in their ability to locate work being somewhat limited. There is no question for me that there is a drastic difference in how many freelance writers are in the marketplace, to how many jobs that marketplace has for them to compete for. And this was an observation by a freelancer out of New York city. I would have thought New York would have enough work to go around and then some, but apparently even the city that never sleeps has its problems with the economy.</p>
<p>Anyway, in her article, I had been prepared for Breslin to be starting out on a humorous note when she immediately said no, freelancers can not be friends. I expected that to be followed by a bit of fluffy fun before she turned serious and answered the question. The trouble is, she was serious, from the first unequivocal &#8220;No&#8221;.</p>
<p>I must admit that I felt a little &#8216;ow!&#8217; at her comment about twenty-something writer&#8217;s having nowhere to go but their parent&#8217;s basement. I was once a twenty-something writer&#8230; and I have lived (or rather had my bedroom and office) in my parent&#8217;s basement. Was that because I could not make it as a freelance writer? No, I was actually starting to find my footing and by the time I was living in my parent&#8217;s basement I was making a full-time income off of my writing. I lived with my parents because I was their caregiver. That is all beside the point, though, the point is &#8211; can freelancers be friends?</p>
<p>Yes. I have friends that are freelancers. My best friends are other writers. We&#8217;re all women, and we all share mostly the same interests. Granted, my best friends all live over a thousand miles away, but that is because I am a hermit that lives in Alaska and they all live in the lower 48.</p>
<p>I think the evidence that freelancers can be friends lies in the popularity of things such as Writer&#8217;s Market and the many websites that offer information for how to find writing markets and resources.</p>
<p>Perhaps the perspective that freelancers can not be friends stems from a competitive market, but friends can compete. I would be delighted if my friend was able to make some money to pay her bills, even if it meant I had lost out on a job. At least I would know the person who had got the work and that they needed it as much as I did.</p>
<p>I freely share information, including how I come up with ideas, but I probably would not tell anyone but my best friends the exact particulars of &#8220;I found a great source of information on this topic here, so I am going to write an article about it focusing on this aspect of it, and hitting these target talking points, because that magazine is prime for such pieces, so I should have a really good chance to be published when I submit it.&#8221;</p>
<p>In short, I might tell everyone &#8220;That magazine publishes things on these subjects&#8221;, but I would think twice before I told everyone my full outline for how and where I will do research for a article covering a specific focus. And what magazine I think is primed for accepting such things. My friends I would talk to about it, mostly because they are my best source for brainstorming on what angles I am missing and how I could better narrow the focus of my proposed idea to best fit the magazine and what they look for.</p>
<p>And if one of my friends decides they want to submit a story as well, that is great. I know they would do their own legwork and we would most likely share everything we collected on the subject. Then we would likely read one another&#8217;s work to see how it could be improved and make critique suggestions.  And when the articles are shipped off, it would be no more of a competition than with anyone else that would have sent a competing article in. The only difference is, my friend and I collaborated our skills on making our articles a bit more polished and maybe, just maybe, one of them will stand out above the rest as being what the editor is looking for.</p>
<p>Who will get published? I don&#8217;t know, but I&#8217;d like to think it would be worthy of a free cup of coffee or tea being bought for the person who lost out while we got together to scheme on our next article attack.  We just need to make sure that we keep improving on our skills, and write to the best of our own individual capabilities, so that we stand out above everyone else when we submit.</p>
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		<title>Writing Shorthand</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Aug 2011 22:42:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I have been practicing my writing shorthand by sitting up in the morning and writing down notes on the things I see in the news that catch my interest. I have determined that if I want to get fast enough to actually be able to take notes in press conference type of situation. I think [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have been practicing my writing shorthand by sitting up in the morning and writing down notes on the things I see in the news that catch my interest. I have determined that if I want to get fast enough to actually be able to take notes in press conference type of situation. I think for that my Smartpen would be my only hope at the moment.</p>
<p>Still, I am able to do reasonably well at keeping up with notes, it is just the direct quotes that are still giving me fits. I have not yet perfected the technique of writing as fast as people can talk. Thankfully, however, my memory recall skills are getting better, so as long as it is not very long, I can recall a direct quote long enough to get it written down.</p>
<p>This morning I think my favorite direct quote came from President Obama when he was talking about turning fifty. &#8220;Which means that by the time I wake up tomorrow, I will have an email from AARP&#8230; asking me to call Obama, and ask him to protect medicare.&#8221; I even manged to recall most of the exact wording without needing to refer back to my note on the quote.</p>
<p>I think my morning news watching with a notebook will be a good skill builder for being faster at note taking, especially if I can get the hang of recalling the shorthand I learned when I started writing twenty years ago.</p>
<p>Back then, a paragraph like this one would look a bit more like the next one, with shorthand making memory prompts so I could get an idea out fast.</p>
<p>Bk thn, a PP like ths 1 wld lk a nit more lk the nxt 1, w/shrthnd mking memory prmpts so I cld get an idea out fst.</p>
<p>While there were some secretarial shorthand marks that I would make when writing, it was mostly abbreviations, leaving out vowels and replacing numbers with the numeric form rather than spelling any out. I also used to only write a name once, then use easier references when I could (he, she, they), or just use an initial in place of a full name.</p>
<p>Somewhere over the years, and under all of the stress, I think I just lost confidence in my ability to recall things. A loss that extended to the point that I lost faith even in my ability to recall what the shorthand references meant.  I am slowly rebuilding my self confidence in my skill to recall information accurately, but self doubt is an insidious beast that does not like to let go once it has sunk its claws in.</p>
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		<title>Pinched Nerve Slowly Healing</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Aug 2011 22:48:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>The pinched nerve in my shoulder is slowly but surely getting better, mostly if I stay off of the computer and don&#8217;t type anything. Hard to do when one makes ends meet via their writing.</p> <p>I&#8217;m taking the recommended NSAID ibuprofen pain relievers for reducing any swelling and easing off the pain, now if I [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The pinched nerve in my shoulder is slowly but surely getting better, mostly if I stay off of the computer and don&#8217;t type anything. Hard to do when one makes ends meet via their writing.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m taking the recommended NSAID ibuprofen pain relievers for reducing any swelling and easing off the pain, now if I could just afford to spend the next few weeks not working I might actually heal up okay, but that is not about to happen. Someday I want to get far enough ahead in life that I can go sit at the local club for a few hours and not worry about having to keep up with my work load. For now, however, I have taken a ibuprofen and have my V-Fusion drink and I am getting back to work after a couple days of taking it easy and staying off the computer to catch up on some work around the house and play a bit of Sims &#8211; which is good vegging out, since for me, Sims means creating a Sim that should act a certain way (which I already had several of them made up) and then letting them loose in their house to watch what they do. It is a far better predictor of if they are going to act how they are meant to if they are not told what to do, and it makes it kind of like kicking back watching soap operas all day while I watch them wander about to see if they are reacting how they should or not.</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t say my shoulder is at 100%&#8230; not even sure it is at 50%, but my work needs to get caught up before I am buried under it, so tonight I catch up on work I should have got done over the past week.</p>
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		<title>Day Two of desktops not loading sites</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 24 Jun 2011 22:09:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>Here it is on day two of having to update my websites using my cell phone and I am wondering if they sell keyboards for Motorola Milestones. These things need bigger keys on the keyboards.</p> <p>I am at least grateful the phone loads the sites, even if it is slower typing on the phone.</p> <p>I [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here it is on day two of having to update my websites using my cell phone and I am wondering if they sell keyboards for Motorola Milestones. These things need bigger keys on the keyboards.</p>
<p>I am at least grateful the phone loads the sites, even if it is slower typing on the phone.</p>
<p>I really need to figure out issue with desktops and loading my sites though. This is frustrating. I can not update sites on the cell phone.</p>
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		<title>How much is your time worth?</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jun 2011 17:01:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p>I was looking for more work online and realized that Alaska&#8217;s $7.75 per hour minimum wage is by no means a low hourly wage. Anyone that thinks it is, just needs to try to earn some money as a writer.</p> <p>Or as anything relating to writing and online researching. I was looking at a request [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was looking for more work online and realized that Alaska&#8217;s $7.75 per hour minimum wage is by no means a low hourly wage. Anyone that thinks it is, just needs to try to earn some money as a writer.</p>
<p>Or as anything relating to writing and online researching. I was looking at a request for a virtual assistant, and in one of the ads I found the person wants to pay $30 for 25 hours of work. That means they want someone that will do all kinds of tasks for them such as writing and research and a variety of other listed daily activities, for at least 5 hours per day, and they want to pay them $1.20 an hour. That&#8217;s $6 for a full day&#8217;s worth of work. That might seem like a lot in some countries, but for me it does not even pay one month&#8217;s fees on my websites. I think my mom made more than that in the 1960&#8242;s working as a waitress in diners.</p>
<p>The online world, in particular the world wide aspect of the online world, has completely devalued the skills of anyone working online for a living. Average pay per word seems to have dropped down to $0.002 per word for writing. That means that to earn $1 online a writer needs to write 500 words. Average typing speed is, I think, around 62 wpm&#8230; going by that, if all they do is write, no research no pauses, solid typing at the computer, a writer can kick out around 3,720 words in an hour. And that does not account for any research or proofreading after the piece has been written. So, let&#8217;s be very crack-the-whip toward the writers and say that they can write 2,000 words in an hour, which includes a little research about what they are supposed to be writing and writing it, and proofreading, and since they are writing it for someone else that also needs to include the time it takes for them to send the writing back to the person who now owns it.</p>
<p>Yes, owns it. For that $0.002 per word the writer is giving away all rights to the piece and the person purchasing it owns all rights to it forever.</p>
<p>So, 2,000 words plus research plus sending them off to the person who bought them means the writer is working very hard to earn $4 an hour. An average of about half minimum wage in Alaska. Earning roughly $20 per day, five days a week makes it $100. So, writing their fingers off five days a week a writer can earn around $400 in a month, bringing the income for online writing up to somewhere between $500 and $1,000 if they work really really hard and can get enough work that they are not taking breaks or weekends off.</p>
<p>There is no room for the writer to take on a second job, because all of their time is spent writing to manage to earn what is basically rent for their home for the month. There is little if any time left for them to relax and enjoy time with friends and family, not if they want to hit the mark of possibly earning enough to pay the mortgage.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not sure what a writer is to do when a world-wide market for skills means that even the best writers are competing for work that can be done by someone willing for work for $1 a month. And it is really bad that even $5 a week of guaranteed income is looking really good to me, no matter how hard I have to work for it.</p>
<p>So, what is the least you would take per word writing online? Has the online market caused a major undervaluation of a writer&#8217;s time?</p>
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